Friday, November 13, 2009

Public Transport

'I need a new job,' he thought, gazing at his tired reflection in the bus window. Mid-November wind blew rain against his window, obscuring what little he could see past his mirrored face. It was Christmas season in retail now and stores were open later. He hated closing shifts and having to come home in the dark.

Though he was tired and lost in his thoughts the sound of a disturbance behind him roused him instantly. A fallen umbrella, a barking grunt and then the screams. He was out of his seat, gun in hand before the driver had time to react. He had a bead on his target quickly given the confines of a city bus, but as the driver realized what was happening and hit the brakes he had to grab onto a pole to avoid falling backwards. Regaining his balance he found he had lost his original shot. The zombie had fallen forward as well and an older couple sitting directly behind were in his field of fire. "Hey!" he shouted. The zombie rose and took two to the head, dropping him instantly.

The bus was silent. A few other passengers had managed to draw their weapons but most had only been in the process of drawing them. Seeing there was no further threat their guns were returned to holsters, purses and pockets.

"Did he bite anyone?" he asked, pistol still drawn. His ears were still ringing from the two shots so he asked again, but from the look on the young woman three seats from the rear, he already knew the answer.

"Fuck," he whispered to himself.

It was his kill, his responsibility. That was the law. He took a few steps towards her, enough to see the bitten arm she cradled. The driver approached after calling it in and locking down the bus.

"Haz/Mat team'll be here in ten, they're just finishing a clean at the mall. 'Nother bus has been rerouted for us," he reported. "I swept the bus back at the loop twenty minutes ago and I was clean. He musta come on pretty sick but I didn't notice him." The girl looked up, eyes brimming but not crying yet. She had that look of incredulity he had seen far too many times.

'Fuckin' closing shifts,' he thought again. "You want to call somebody?" he asked. Then the tears came.

"Thank you," she whispered.

"Drop her, dude, you know the rules," called a kid from across the aisle.

"Shut it, let her make her call," he said watching her fumble with her cell.

"We've all got connections to make, buddy," said a man in a business suit beside him. He had drawn a snub nosed .38 from under his jacket. "If you can't handle it-"

"Clean your hands off and try again," he said to the woman whose bloody fingers were slipping on the phone. His gun was now pointing at Business Man's face.

"Mister..." came the driver from behind. He pulled back the hammer on the gun and looked around from face to face.

"I just finished a nine hour shift. I'm tired, I'm hungry and my feet are killing me. Christmas is a month away and I say she gets to say goodbye to somebody. Does anyone have a problem with that?" There were no responses. Some stared back angry or frightened, most just avoided his gaze.

"Hello, Mom..."

'I need a new job,' he thought, closing his eyes.

23 comments:

Irish Gumbo said...

Yeah, I reckon you do need a new job. Maybe one working from a home office.

Good short story.

otin said...

Very very Good! I love it!!

The Dental Maven said...

That. Was a good one, Captain.

Laszlo Brown said...

If you got bitten, would you admit it?

Middle Aged Woman said...

Oh. My. God. YOU are amazing, dude.

Mama Dawg said...

I sooooooooooo wish you'd quit your sucky job and do this full time.

Joanie M said...

oooohh!!!! shivers!!!!

Michele said...

Amazing story telling right there.

Melanie D said...

well done brother!

Mary Anne said...

Now I know why I hate public transportation!
Good one!

Jay Ferris said...

Creepy freaky awesome -- I demand more!

Jenni said...

Love!

Nyx said...

Freakin public transport.

Never know what you're going to run into.

Gaston Studio said...

I was totally prepared to hate this 'cause I don't like zombie stories, but it was sooooo good!

surprised mom said...

This was an amazing story and nothing like I expected. I should have known with you writing it. Have you ever thought of putting your words in a book and selling it? You are a wonderful writer with a fantastic imagination. What profession were you in before you lost your job? A writer is what I would think you would do next.

Beth said...

I'm glad she got to call someone. And I'm impressed it was her mother she called.

Amy said...

Beautifully written, Captain, but I think this one should have come with a little warning. The ZNN has been pretty light to date. Even when you guys get all serious it's serious-funny, so okay. But this one... This one was just too sad. Like weeping on the keyboard type sad. All that poignance and nary a joke to be found, not the usual Captain's fare. It's good stuff, don't misunderstand, it just caught me off guard is all.

Amber Page Writes said...

That. Was. Fantastic.

Am feeling like maybe I need to put my creative hat on. Go you!

James (SeattleDad) said...

That was a great story, Captain.

Vodka Mom said...

oh my GOODNESS Captain. That kicked it.



xoxox

Pseudonymous High School Teacher said...

Spot on Captain.

Cat said...

F'n hate it when that happens.

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